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Cold beams filter earthward,
Silver radience bathing the distant woman
Strolling the forest depths alone.
A cold angel, she seems,
Immortal luminance made tangible;
A resplendant mist given form.
Emerald orbs catch the moonlight
And reflect it heavenward once more.
A cool night breeze sifts through
Her silk tresses
Swirling gossamer strands about her pale face.
Her smile, rare rays of liquid silver
Playing on rose petal lips
Against a backdrop of smooth, translucent skin.
Her lithe form encapsuled in folds of night
That whisper as she moves,
The only sound her elven blood allows.
Those green eyes of hers glance over her shoulder,
Shimmering with secrets.
Another mysterious smile, tinged with mischieviousness
Before a fold of deepest night is pulled over her head.
Her silent footsteps draw her further into the woods
Where she is wrapped in shadows,
Kept safe from the approaching dawn.
©2005-2009 ~munkyness
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This poem is actually written with my character Atheryen in mind, though it does have a sort of duel meaning, which is why I placed it in the Spiritual catagory.

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Very beautiful language and excellent and very strong imagery imagery
This has to be my favourite line:

Where she is wrapped in shadows,
Kept safe from the approaching dawn.



..still I think you could improve your poem if u gave it more structure by deviding it into stanzas. But thats only my opinion.
However its beautiful as I said and I like everything moon so I will keep it :)

:+fav:

xElla

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The night he moved out was terrible/That evening she went through hell/ His absence wasn't the problem/But the corkscrew had gone as well.

-The Loss by Wendy Cope-

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